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Poetry on evolution

Yesterday, at a local farmer's market, a young guy was sitting with a typewriter and a sign saying "Free poems". I asked him to write a poem about evolution, and this is what I got:



I asked him if he was religious, and he answered that he was.

Three points:
  1. True, a single cell contains a machinery that is incredibly complex. The components and the way they interact are high in number, and we don't know them all. It is indeed hard to imagine how such a thing could evolve, but this is mission impossible; difficult should be a walk in the park.
  2. No evolutionary biologists (in their right mind) are saying that it happened by accident. However, we can understand what is meant when creationists phrase it like that. Random chance does have a lot to do with evolution, and that can be construed to mean 'accident' (even though that word carries a negative connotation, which, in the case of life, I find hard to accept). However, and of course, natural selection is anything but chance - more like the exact opposite, in fact - and no evolutionary biologists (in their right mind) contests that natural selection is an important evolutionary mechanism (though it is discussed how important relative to other mechanisms, like genetic drift or developmental bias). What creationists might mean is that the component of chance, with or without natural selection to weed out the negative, un(re)productive results, they do not accept.
  3. Thus, it takes a huger amount of faith, the creationists think, to accept evolution rather than creationism. Creationism is in a sense not complex. If one refrains from asking questions about the nature of the creator, then it is pretty simple to say "God did it". The irony here is that accepting evolutionary hypotheses does not require faith at all, but is based on evidence (which is largely the antithesis of faith). Religious faith is in spite of the evidence, while science always follows the evidence. The evidence may not be complete, and so we must withhold judgment until more evidence is in. And that is the status on the question of the origin of the cell. It is not the status of so many other questions about the origin of organic life, where we have so much evidence for evolution that it takes faith only the religious can muster to deny it.

3 comments:

  1. wasn't it anyway clear that creationism is an escape for those who do not understand science?

    Cheers Arend

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  2. ...if one refrains from asking questions about the nature of the creator...

    Which is never a fair condition, though. Descent with modification is also pretty damn simple if you refrain from asking questions about the nature of the modifications.

    Man, I would be so pissed if that happened to me. The ubiquity of religious delusions is so.... annoying.

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  3. Pfft. That pile of words should not be dignified with the name poetry. People should not be credible as freeverse writers until they have become well-versed (pun!) enough in forms to be able to transcend them.

    Here is one of my favorite forms, a pantoum. The repetitions are part of the form; regular meter and rhyme is optional. The story is a little fanciful, but hey, free poem!


    evolve, to lift your neck above the grass,
    to glimpse fresh fields that wave a brighter green.
    the herd you sprang from alters as they pass;
    stems gnawed to earth, trees scratched on till they lean.

    to glimpse fresh fields that wave a brighter green,
    your ancestors grew strong and wise, when thick
    stems gnawed to earth, trees scratched on till they leaned
    struck bedrock. then they learned another trick.

    your ancestors grew strong and wise, when, thick
    upon the ground, their cousins froze, expired.
    struck bedrock, then, they learned another trick--
    that beast which tames itself can conquer fire.

    upon the ground their cousins froze, expired;
    the herd you sprang from alters as they pass.
    that beast which tames itself can conquer fire.
    evolve, to lift your head above the grass.

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